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The blog is about me being independent. I would like for you to take sentence structure , humour , and description/meaning into consideration more so than punctuation .
Independence
I learned at a very young age to do things myself , and I learned to do them very well. By age 5 ,I could do so much more than recite the alphabet , get myself dressed and tie my own shoes. I was able to get myself to and from places with my own two feet , whether it be biking or walking. At age nine I started taking unimaginably long walks to get to where I needed or wanted to go . By 11 , I was decorating my parent’s home elaborately for Christmas , with outside lighting. I have assembled desks all by myself , when it reads right on the box that more than one person is needed . If I need to go grocery shopping without a car , no problem ! I just dangle three bags over each handlebar on my bike , and I get myself home .
The team lifts at work are what Wows everyone the most. There are pieces of furniture at work which weigh a ton. I lift these pieces of furniture into the customers van or truck with the least amount of help .I remember being written a comment card once at work which made me chuckle . It said “Midnight , team lifts WOW!.” Keyword there is “team” but there is no ” I ” in team . Independence however starts with an “I” so basically I have learned to go places , do things , dine , watch movies all by myself….
Determination also plays a role in my strength . If I need or want something , I will go through a hurricane to acquire whatever that need or want may be ! I might walk on hot coals to get to that department store and buy that cute sweater that happens to be the last one left in my size.
The average person may feel uncomfortable entering a dark crowded movie theater alone , or may feel uncomfortable sitting at a formal dining restaurant eating by themselves . . . . But not I .
I . . . I . . . I . . . Beautiful letter isn’t it ? Maybe one day it will become my favorite letter. . .

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